Fairy+tale+rewrite

Goldey Locks As Mama Bear made Papa bear and I porridge me and Papa Bear sit down at the table Papa Bear say’s “When will it be done?”Mama Bear replies “It’s done now!”As Mama Bear starts poring the porridge me and Papa wait patiently, well he waits patiently I’m jumping up and down with excitement. As she hands us our bowls, I smell the sickly sweet smell of honey porridge. Papa takes some in a wooden spoon and takes a bite he yells and hollers “owe!”And spits out a pile of steaming porridge. Mama Bear say’s “Lets go for a walk, what do you say?” I jump up and head for the door and put on my jacket in a hurry. Papa’s right behind me and mama’s taking up the rear. And we start walking down a well worn path through the forest as Mama Bear and Papa Bear are talking about how good the weather is I run over to a moss covered tree. I see movement near the base of the tree. I call “Mama, Papa comes look at this!”As they wandered over and looked at the pile of ants eating the chunk of bread Papa sees foot prints and points and say’s “They lead back to the house!” Mama Bear says quietly “Should we go back?” Papa says “We need to if there in our house.”As we made our way back to the house we notice a single pair of shoe prints leading all the way up to our poorch.Papa Bear say’s quietly “Ill go in first.”We nod. He opens the door slowly and we hear the creak of rusted hinges. As papa makes his way into the house Mama Close behind him I notice nothing’s missing. As I step across the threshold Papa bear say’s “Someone’s been eating my porridge.” “Mama Bear say’s “Someone’s been eating my porridge too.” I look in both Mama AND Papas porridge and see a big spoonful of porridge gone in each. I wonder if they ate some of my porridge two. As I look into my bowel I let out a gasp and yell “SOMEONE’S BEEN EATING MY PORRIDGE AND THEY ATE IT ALL UP!” As Mama Bear quits my crying papa leads us up the stairs and into our bedroom. Papa looks at his bed and say’s “someone’s been sleeping in my bed.” I look and see the blanket on the floor. Mama Bear say’s quietly “Someone’s been sleeping in my bed two.” We also see Mama bears blanket on the floore.I say “I wonder if anyone’s been sleeping in my bed?”We all walk over to my bed and see a little girl with gold hair pretty blue eyes. We all shake with fear! Then she does the most unexpected thing she yawned and opened her eyes and saw me and Papa and Mama bear watching her she screamed and jumped up and ran past us and down the stairs and out into the woods. That was the last time we saw the little girl with blond hair again